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个人陈述中最令招生官反感的“套路”大全

发布时间:2017-08-21 点击量:

  据英国《电讯报》4月21日报道,学生在个人陈述中所用的“陈词滥调”会损害其未来的职业发展。下面上海外国语大学出国留学官网的老师帮大家解答!

  个人陈述中被人用烂的句子,各位准备写申请的童鞋可要留心哟!

  1. “自打记事起,我就……”(For as long as I can remember I have...)

  2. “我申请这个课程是因为……”(I am applying for this course because...)

  3. “我一直对…感兴趣”(I have always been interested in...)

  4. “在我一生当中,我一直很享受…”(Throughout my life, I have always enjoyed...)

  5. “回顾我的教育经历,我……”(Reflecting on my educational experiences...)

  6. “护理专业是一门十分具有挑战性的……”(Nursing is a very challenging and demanding [career/profession/course)

  7. “在学术上,我一直是……”(Academically, I have always been...)

  8. “我一直想从事…职业”(I have always wanted to pursue a career in...)

  9. “我一直对…充满热情”(I have always been passionate about...)

  10. “教育是充满力量的武器,你可以用它来改变世界。”(Education is the most powerful weapon which you can use to change the world.)

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